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Coraline

First of all: o WordPress automatic update, why are you failing me?  You just want to make me have to update the old, boring manual way.  Sigh.  I love wordpress, but it’s annoying when things don’t work.

Went to see Coraline in 3D today (yes, we only just got a release of it in Oz).  First of all, seeing it in 3D was so worth it – I have to wonder how it’s going to translate to the regular screen now, after seeing it in all of its shininess.  I won’t spoil it for anyone for anyone who hasn’t seen it, suffice to say that I thought it was a great adaptation of the book.  And I love the book.

I am also now all antsy to see the movie adaptation of The Lovely Bones after seeing the trailer this morning.  I enjoyed the book, though I’d have to reread it to give a decent review of it right now, as the details are lost in the fog of memory.  The movie looks very shiny, though.

Still enjoying some holidays here (hence the mid-afternoon movie, at which we had almost the whole cinema to ourselves), but it’ll be back to the word mines on Monday.  It’s one thing that I think a lot of writers don’t do enough of – taking breaks to refresh the brain and bring back the real desire to lose yourself in words.

Holiday photos

I’m slowly going through holiday photos from last week.

Tingle (by Azhure*)

Tingle from the tree-top walk.  Aka a really massive tree.

Whale! (by Azhure*)

Whale in Albany.

Click over to Flickr for a few more. I’ll be adding more as I go through them.

Resting

A week away from writing (and mostly reading – I took a huge bag of books with me, and only opened one to read properly.  And that was a reread – Bold as Love, which for some reason I’d been craving to read again).

The last few days Story has been invading my brain again.  Some feedback from my betas on The White Raven has gotten me pondering the start of the novel, and how I should be doing things better.  I don’t think I’ll be going back to rewrite anything at this stage, but there may be changes when I get to the next draft.

The husband is still on holidays this week, and I’m thinking that I may keep him some company and stay away from the word mines until next week.  I may make some notes and I need to do some pondering on a potential short story.  But mostly, I think I need to catch on some reading and refilling of the well.

We won’t mention the million things that I need to do around the house, as well.  Probably because I won’t actually get around to doing them ;)

Commence radio silence

Will be mostly offline for the next week while the husband and I drive around down south.

I’ll be checking email and possibly blogging a little bit, but likely not returning email or messages.

See you next Sunday!

Website updates

As some of you may have noticed (or possibly not, since I believe most people read these posts through LJ or dreamwidth), I’ve been messing about with the website a little bit of late.

I’ve been changing the site appearance back and forth a bit, and have settled (I think) on a template for the time being that I’m happy with.

I still have a tonne of website stuff I want to put up, namely some actual writing samples, but those will have to wait for a little while.  Just to show that, yanno, I do actually write, and don’t just blog randomly about word counts and the like ;)

White Raven draft two progress

Today’s progress:

Project: White Raven draft two

New words: 2,200

Total words: 34,949

Goal: 100k

Writing:

A decent writing day today.  I feel like all I ever say about the writing is that it’s either been a good day or a bad day.  I actually thought today would be an ordinary day, since I was headfuzzy this morning, but it turned out to be decent when I settled down to the actual writing.

Real life:

Laundry.  Baked banana and blueberry muffins, just because I could.

I don’t know if I’m going to be writing for the next week or two.  The husband is on holidays, and we’re actually going away next week.  I plan on taking the laptop with me, though, and may still work.  There will probably not be blog updates even if I do work, though, since I’m unlikely to have net access while we’re travelling.

White Raven progress

Today’s progress:

Project: White Raven draft two

New words: 2,034

Total words: 32,747

Goal: 100k

Writing:

Fuzzy brain made getting anything more done today impossible.   Still, I’m not complaining overmuch about getting 2k written.

Real life:

Grocery shopping this morning.  Fighting tiredness all day.  Blah.

Writing musings

I feel like I’ve moved into a new level of writing.

There’s nothing concrete to put forth to present this.  But I find that, when I look at stuff I wrote even six months ago, I can see so many places where my writing is weak.  I can step back from it, and – even better – I can see how to fix it.

Undoubtably I’ll be saying the same thing in another six months about what I’m writing now.

This is a good thing.  There’s no point in writing and learning unless you can progress.

How has this come about?  Lots of different things.  Reading a lot – reading critically, especially of books that are popular (and often not considered “good”) is a really important way to learn.  It’s not all about dry technique – we can all point to a book that shows very little actual writing talent, but is loved by the public all the same.  I’ve also been listening to a lot of writing podcasts – namely I Should Be Writing, The Secrets and Writing Excuses.

Finding an awesome group of beta readers who are willing to deconstruct my writing word by word is probably worth more than all of these things combined.  I cannot express how valuable all of my betas are.  Anyone who’s writing in a vacuum – find yourself some first readers.  You won’t regret it.

I learn almost as much betaing for other people, too.  I read or heard recently that we’ll often look for the things in others’ work that we’re actively working on ourselves, which is a really interesting way of looking at it for me.

It’s challenging myself, forcing myself to keep on learning and developing.  And it keeps on going.

Writing linkage: Revision Checklist

Lifted from Nathan Bransford’s blog (which you should be reading if you don’t already):

- Does the main plot arc initiate close enough to the beginning that you won’t lose the reader?
- Does your protagonist alternate between up and down moments, with the most intense towards the end?
- Are you able to trace the major plot arcs throughout the book? Do they have up and down moments?
- Do you have enough conflict?
- Does the reader see both the best and worst characteristics of your main characters?
- Do your characters have backstories and histories? Do these impact the plot?
- Is the pacing correct for your genre? Is it consistent?
- Is your voice consistent? Is it overly chatty or sarcastic?
- Is the tense completely consistent? Is the perspective consistent?
- Is there sufficient description that your reader feels grounded in the characters’ world?
- Is there too much description? (David R. Slayton)
- Are momentous events given the weight they deserve?
- Look closely at each chapter. If you can take out a chapter and the plot will still make sense, is it really necessary? Should some events be folded in with others?
- Do the relationships between your characters develop and change and become more complicated as the book goes on?
- What do your characters want? Is it apparent to the reader? Do they have both conscious and unconscious motivations?
- Do you know what your writing tics are? Do you overuse adverbs, metaphors, facial expressions, non-”said” dialogue tags, or interjections? Have you removed them?
- Do you overuse certain words or phrases? Is your word choice perfect throughout?
- Does your book come to a completely satisfying conclusion? Does it feel rushed?
- Do your main characters emerge from the book irrevocably changed?
- Are your characters distinguishable? Does it make sense to combine minor characters? (Kiersten)
- Do each of your scenes make dramatic sense on their own as well as move the overall plot forward? (Pete Peterson)

Writers: something you should be reading

The Freelancer’s Survival Guide by Kristine Kathryn Rusch.

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